War vs Whakaaio
War defeats world peace
Bombs create chaos and death
Peace defeats nguha.
People seek refuge
Rocky hills provide cover
Nature calls for help.
War gives death and pain
Peace brings love and forgiveness
War and peace brings life.
When nature calls out
We ignore what we have done
We talk of new wars.
By Hazel
Hi Hazel,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Reitu and I am a year 7 at Paihia in Te Ngahere. I like your post about war vs whakaaio. I like the words you have put into it and also like how you have put in a photo next to your writing.
Why did you have to write a poem?
How did you come up with the idea?
Thanks and keep on blog posting,
Reitu
Hi Hazel again it Sky. I like your post about War vs Whakaio. I like how it is organised before put into the order you have set it out. Some of the thing I would like to know is did you have to write this poem? Why did you pick this for your poem? Well done that all the question that I will ask you. I like every piece of work you have made they are all wonderful piece of work so keep up all of the hard work you have done for us to see and comment on.
ReplyDeleteHi Hazel,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Viva and I am a year 7 at Panmure Bridge School. I like your post about war vs whakaaio. I like the words you have put into your work and also like how you have put in a photo next to your writing to show what it looks like!
from Viva.