Hi Hazel My name is Avalon l am a year 7 and l go to Panmure bridge School. l think you could have worked on writing more in your blurb to tell the reader more about your learning. l really like how you did this because it tells people what to do when they have their puberty. Great job Keep it up
I really liked how you showed emotional change in your DLO, and how you added pictures to show of each picture what its meaning is. In your next blog can you please add a blurb to have a more detailed and understanding work.
Hi Hazel
ReplyDeleteMy name is Avalon l am a year 7 and l go to Panmure bridge School. l think you could have worked on writing more in your blurb to tell the reader more about your learning. l really like how you did this because it tells people what to do when they have their puberty.
Great job Keep it up
Hi Hazel
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you showed emotional change in your DLO, and how you added pictures to show of each picture what its meaning is. In your next blog can you please add a blurb to have a more detailed and understanding work.